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It was midnight. I couldn't sleep. I knew he was sleeping in the living room, in the couch that I was so jealous of, for I wasn't allowed to cuddle him, to feel the warmth of his body, to hear his heart beating in the stillness of the night, as he rests in my arms.

I looked outside the window and saw the deserted streets of London, dark and distant, just like him. I looked at the stars, the way the shined in the black velvet around them, just like his razors. The stars and my love and longing for him were the only things that remained the same after all those years. If he only knew…

I looked at the clock. It was a quarter past twelve. Time was running so slowly. Why couldn't I get him out of my mind, just for that night, so I could find some peace? I had to see him. I knew I shouldn't but I had to.

I got out of the bed and walked to the door of my bedroom. I stood there for a while, trying to convince myself to get back to bed. I didn't make it. I opened the door and faced the hallway that was leading to the living room.

Before I knew it I was there, kneeling on the floor, beside him. Our faces were so close… If he had moved a bit our lips would have met, but if he had opened his eyes I would have been dead before I could gasp. I didn't leave though. I could feel his breath on my face and I found myself trembling. Oh God, he was so close and yet so far away.

I slowly moved my hand and stroke his hair. They were so soft, softer than I had imagined. Suddenly a tide of emotions went through me. I had to. I knew I shouldn't but I just had to.

I closed my eyes and moved my face towards his, until I felt his lips on mine. They felt so cold and yet so inviting. I started kissing him. Tears were running down from my face to his, as he responded to my kisses. I was in heaven. I couldn't part my lips from his and I don't regret that I didn't. I started shivering. He kissed me with so much passion as if he was to drink me down. I never thought that a kiss could feel like this, not even in my wildest dreams. I forgot about the pie shop, the judge, the murders… I only knew that he was kissing me as eagerly as I kissed him.

When our lips parted, for I was out of breath, I realized that he had not wakened. He was mumbling something in his sleep. I moved closer so I could hear… "Lucy?"

I felt like somebody had just pulled the earth under my feet and I fell to the empty space. I couldn't breathe. We had just kissed and he was dreaming about her. I stood up and looked at him. Tears began to flow again, only now they were tears of pain. I ran into my room. I locked the door and laid on the bed. Everything seemed lifeless. Even the stars were not shining as bright as they did before. I fell asleep after a while with his kiss on my lips and his rejection in my heart.

When I woke up my eyes were burning. It seems that I've been crying all night. I stood up and headed to the mirror. I look at myself. I looked at my lips and put a finger on them, pointlessly trying to bring back the sensation.

I would go back that night. I wouldn't stop even if he called me Lucy. It was enough that I could kiss him and love him even if he didn't love me.

It was midnight. I didn't give it much thought. I just went to the living room. I kneeled beside him as I did the night before. I kissed him the moment my knees met the ground. He kissed me back just like the last time. I climbed on the couch and pressed my body against his. I held him. He held me.

I was in my wedding dress, in a huge white room with the largest windows I have ever seen. I could feel a breeze coming from the ocean. I couldn't describe how I felt. Even now I am not sure.

And then I looked down and I saw it.

I saw my lifeless body in a pool of blood. He stood there by me. He kneeled beside me. He touched my lips. He took out his razor again. It had blood on it. He cut a curl from my hair. He threw the razor away. He walked out of the room, leaving me alone. I felt my heart breaking. "Don't cry love…"
Ok, so this is a story inspired by Sweeney Todd and the relationship between the demon barber and Mrs. Lovett. It's written in a Mrs. Lovett POV... Anyway, I suck at reviws.

Some of you might have read this... It was featured in an account of a friend of mine for a very short period of time... And I thought that since I have an account here now, I should upload it.

Comments and Favs are always appreciated. Don't forget that comments help us improve...

Sweeney Todd does not belong to me. I own the work I put on it and the storyline, or whatever, you get the point! It can not be used in any way, without my permission.
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Rosebud278 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Writer
It's sweet in a sadistic sort of way I guess.
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Is that good or bad? :P
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Rosebud278 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
Well if your a sadist then it's good, but if not then bad, definitely bad. XD
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
so... you think it's bad...
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Rosebud278 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student Writer
Oh no, I actually enjoyed it. I just thought it was sad that she died
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
oh! ok. Well yes, it is sad that she died (I don't like killing Mrs. Lovett) but it was the only way to end it (or it seemed to me)
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Rosebud278 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Writer
I see
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mydearstar Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
hello.oh!how nice and lovely.i wanna cry
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
thanks! :)
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mydearstar Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
your welcome!
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Marilovett Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love it! It's sad because he killed mrs lovett but why he cut a curls the mrs lovett's hair? I felt very sad when mrs lovett thought still alive and then she see her lifeless body
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
Thank you! :)
Well the idea is that he regrets killing her. So, he cuts a curl from her hair to keep it and remember her. Because deep down he loves her.
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Marilovett Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ah he cut for remember her
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PhoenixMonroe Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Love this! So sweet, albeit sad. (:
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
Thank you! :heart:
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PhoenixMonroe Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! (:
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SweeneyOfFleetStreet Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
awwwww so sad. poor sweeney!
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
and poor Nellie... she's the one who died :D
Anyway, thanks so much for the comment and for the fave!
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SweeneyOfFleetStreet Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
lol
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Vampire-V Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I love this so much! Sweeney and Lovett are so my OTP! this is beautiful, albeit sad. great work!
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
thank you very much!!! :tighthug:
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Vampire-V Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
you are welcome!
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Cezz-NOT Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I love it. Even if you killed Lovett, it was the only way it could have ended, any other way would've just sucked! This REALLY touched me! Been there before, no kissing, but the pain afterwards was just the same, maybe even worse!

You know, you're great writer, keep up like that ^^
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
oh, thank you so much!!! You made my day!!! It's really nice to hear some encouragement! :hug: :tighthug:
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RetardedJackSparrow Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! This is so beautiful! it's so much like mrs. lovette and i totally felt like i was her, experiancing what she was going though. well i feel for her since i'm in a similar position. except my todd has a girlfriend who's very much alive...but OMG! i loved it! the ending was sad yet beautiful and completely compelling. :)
great job! :)
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
OMG! Thank you soooo much! I am very glad you liked it! :glomp: :tighthug:
Hope you get your Mr. T ;-)
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RetardedJackSparrow Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! This is so beautiful! it's so much like mrs. lovette and i totally felt like i was her, experiancing what she was going though. well i feel for her since i'm in a similar position. except my todd has a girlfriend who's very much alive...but OMG! i loved it! the ending was sad yet beautiful and completely compelling. :)
great job! :)
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4ever-a-mystery Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
this made me cry! :( such beautiful writing though! faved!
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
oh, I'm sorry. I generally don't like to kill Mrs. Lovett (I love her so much) but it could not be any other way. And poor Sweeney he regreats it... Anyway! Thank you soooo much!!! :hug: :tighthug: :glomp:
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4ever-a-mystery Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
no need 2 be sorry :) i love mrs lovett too! kinda sucks that he killed her :( you gotta wonder though, they were the cutest couple... bad sweeney lol jk. and no prob :)
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mary-DBBC Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
yeah they would be a cute couple! They were made for each other. The first time I saw the film I thougt that they would end up together! I was waiting for a kiss or sth (especially after she sang "Always had a fondness for you") But no! HE KILLS HER! I was really upset I swore at Sweeney! Yes, I swore at a fictional character! :D
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4ever-a-mystery Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
lol i tend to do that sometimes myself :) i really thought lucy was dead... that would have been better than sweeney killing her :( lovett and todd could've been together. of course, i would still be jealous lol :lmao:
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